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Re: All Members Read and Respond!!
« Reply #15 on Jan 8, 2006, 3:22pm »

Here's my view on everything mentioned:

•Festivals•

♣In Both Festivals♣ In both of the festivals, young ones will play, and the leaders will plan for the future. They can also discuss important things going on throughout the lands.

♣Winter♣ The Festival of New Times. This festival will be to represent a new year in the land and it will hold winter games. There will also be a large hunt in which all the clans unite and go searching for any food that can be found. (This is held on the first day of winter.)

♣Spring♣ The Festival of New Lives. This festival will represent the season of breeding and birthing and will be more directed towards the younger generations. All clans can get together and let their young ones play. There will be swimming and many games. Once again, a large all-clan hunt will be held.

•Plot•

♣From everywhere they came. The creatures of the lands. They came to the one place that still thrived. This place was like no other. All water was fresh, all food was plentiful. No humans existed in such a place. The climate was always perfect. In the summer it was hot, in the winter, cold. They never experienced drought, what was this place? Nobody knew. The founders of this place? The great Feline Gods. The Great Lion-Jibal. The Great Tigeress-Kiloy. The Great Jaguar-Liak. And last, The Great Ocelot-Methi. The lands blocked all entry of humans, it was made to be perfect, a dream rather. But something went wrong. The Great Grizzly Bear-Zuli, had seen the lands being created. He yearned for such a thing. But he alone held not enough power.

Zuli was power-hungry. Though truly, he was not evil. To the bears, he was a kind ruler. Sure that each was taken care of. He was an excellent father as well. Giving each of his three cubs all neccessary care. But he wanted to give them more. The grizzly population was decreasing, and he couldn't conjure up a place of his own, for his magic wasn't at such a level alone. There was only one solution. Come into these already created lands. The feline leaders were kind, though strict. And had they known what his intentions were, they would have most likely allowed him and his bears to come in. But they didn't know their intentions. So they didn't let the bears come in. At the borders, a horrid war broke out. In the midst of it, Zuli's three clubs were killed. This angered him beyond anything imaginable, and it was then that he realized what was the source for his magic. Love. His love caused him to grow all the more powerful, and he slayed each of the felines single-handedly. All but the lion, of whom had been attacked from behind, but had been able to live just barely. And with his last gulp of air, the Great Lion had slayed Zuli as well. What did this leave? It left all of the Great Ones dead.

The remaining grizzlies left imediately, unsure what to do without the guidance of their leader. But one thing happened that nobody had expected. One of Zuli's three cubs had survived. A deep scar went from his forehead, across his eye and down to his chin. But his father's death by love had given him the ability to live and still see from the injured eye. For years he gathered grizzlies from all over the world, sure that he'd come back and live in the glorious lands. He did enter. But the felines did not notice. The bears lived in an area far, far from where any felines stepped foot. But the grizzlies soon grew hungry for more than what they had, and at this moment, they are plotting more land to take over...more lives to take...and all to conquer...♣

What do you guys think about that? It would mean that a war would possibly break out, but the felines wouldn't be able to notice right away. HOWEVER, as a twist, I was thinking that a mid-sized bear could grow injured, and the other bears cannot take care of him, so they leave him for dead. But a few of the felines find him, and he tells them that he is "lost and unsure where he is". While they nurse him back to health, he gains a lot of valuable information. He is once again healthy now and they send him on his way, still not knowing where he truly comes from. THEN, after that, he realizes he can't do such a thing to his rescuers, so he becomes a traitor. Feeding the bears false information and trying to HELP the felines... What do you think about that as well?

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Re: All Members Read and Respond!!
« Reply #16 on Jan 8, 2006, 5:58pm »

Its and awesome plot no doubt about that.. but I do not feel like hosting to another war.. I don't have it in me.. momentairly.

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Re: All Members Read and Respond!!
« Reply #17 on Jan 25, 2006, 2:08pm »

I think i have something???

Plot

There was a place where something happened tha no one could recall. Something that the heart saw but the eyes missed.
There was something that changed life forever on the prides of us.

No. There was no war. There was no love. But there was conflict. And it still lives today. When the great big cats of earth roamed freely in a place that called The Pride Of Us. They thought that life would be peace full. But then some vistors came. Un Wanted guests. Someone who did not knock. And we were there. And it happened all under our noses.

Something is happening. There has been a rumor that the Hyenas have come. And they are trouble. The big cats roamed and ruled the lands. They loved being treated well. But then things happen. Life has suprises and there is always a bad One. When life gets out of hand. Who will win??? Fate will only decied.

I thought that it could be good

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